Pyramids at Twilight

This is the first of what will hopefully be a number of scenery and character work-ups for a potential cartoon I'm trying to put together for that Frederator send in thing. It's about mine and EZG's character Chicky 1337 and it will be called "Pyramid Scheme." This is the titular pyramid, and those little gray dots and blotches at its base are vehicles and people gathered for a live television airing of the opening of a mummies sarcophagus, which will trigger a curse of bad luck upon those involved and all 100 million telelvion viewers at home. That's the initial premise, and reason for Chicky to go into the pyramid and find a way to fix everything.

I'm trying to establish a good look for the cartoon, so I encourage any constructive criticism of what you see here, especially from those of you who are big into cartooning, either as a hobby or professionally.